Practice IOC oh me, oh my

Below is the excerpt used for my IOC practice.

I had a fair bit of difficulty organizing my thoughts throughout this practice IOC. I attempted to introduce the context of the novel, author, and date for my introduction. I then moved to my thesis that Kathy H.'s point of view develops Ishiguro's main themes of bothering, self-actualization, and the importance of childhood. I discussed each of these points one by one, using pertinent quotes from the text. I concluded by reviewing my points and Ishiguro's intentions.

Criterion A: 5

Criterion B: 3

Criterion C: 3

Criterion D: 3

Total: 14